Holding down the window blind and seeing outside for the very first time,
Noticing the white flakes falling between the cars
A snowman or two, and maybe three, all made by children full of glee
Cause you see it’s snow out there, chilling up the daytime air
Flakes that fall upon your hair
Lets run outside and take a look
Wind blowing the snow off the roof, catching it with our tongues
Coming back in is a chore, wanting to stay out for some more
Snowflakes in a winter blow
Okay this is my first draft of my Winter Poem. CRITIQUES! I neeeeeeeeeed them. Other than that ENJOY!
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